The feedback I received:
Alan- I like how it is set out in columns and gives it the real magazine feel. The top picture is very basic which is good to catch the eye of the audience. Overall I think it is very good.
Mark- I Like how Matt is sat in the corner as it gives the pages a very personal feel. The text wrap round the quotes is a really good idea and works well. I do not think that conventional magazines have the website so big. I would suggest that it is smaller.
Alex- Looks awesome, the contrast between the two pictures shows a connection and the title of 'My Moment' really reflects on his story in the article. I am a bit confused whether it is a review or a biography type- could you make this more obvious?
Alistair- Its all right. (unfortunately Alistair is having a few family problems at the moment so I was not able to get any feedback from him for this.)
Mildred- Very good, Matt was always very good at posing for pictures. The title of 'My moment' and the 4 stars suggests that this is an album review. I would suggest that you change this.
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