Production update 8

I then added and wrote my final cover-line of 'Mark Parkinson- Keeping music alive' and then asked for feedback from my focus group.

Alex- 'Looks very professional. The model is striking a good pose which is connected to the music genre of the magazine and connects to the audience in different ways.'

Alistair- 'its good, I like the way all the font colour contrasts well together and matches the colour of the saxophone and then the smaller, less important cover-lines are black and white.'

Mark- 'The way the colour of the font contrasts with the saturated image connotes a sophisticated audience. One thing I would suggest to change is the price. as the price you have put does not seem the sort of price you would give a higher-class magazine.'

Alan- 'It looks like a very formal cover which appeals to myself. I a not familiar with the cover-line artists, but it does not matter.'

Mildred-'Very good, you are clever. Mark has posed really well. I like the way he is positioned and how he is looking down and concentrating on the saxophone.The use of a few coverlines shows a simple design which will attract those of a higher society.'